My Brothers birthday
On Saturday 14th of June he was turning 13 it was my brothers birthday my brother doesn’t know where we were going but everyone else did so we couldn’t tell him where we were going because he’s always wanted to go where we were going.We were going paint ball cause my brother always wanted to go there.
When we got there all of us were so excited, nervous and happy (my brother) when we got in there my mum asked if me and my cousin wanted to play paint ball and me and my cousin wanted to and didn’t want to at the same time but then when we saw how sore it was but then when we saw inside of the gaming area it was'nt paint the bullets were bb gun bullet’s then me and my cousin said yes so we can play.Then when we said “yes we want to play” then my mum thought that we should wear it then she got two one pieces for me and my cousin cause I was wearing shorts and she just wanted to wear the one pieces cause she was wearing tights and she didn’t want to get hurt.
When we got in our teams New South Wales verses Queens Land.Then Malcume the person that was in charge of the Paint ball place he gave us the mask’s for our protection so the bullets won’t hurt our face.
Malcum told us about the rules that “If you don't want to get shot then you will have to put up your hands so you can cross the middle, If some things wrong with your gun then you will have to come back where you came from to go in the map and There’s flag’s around the place so you will have to pull the rope so it can be your colour blue or red.” You will have to hide from the people and try not to get hit.When we got our guns we were so excited but we couldn't go in yet cause some people were still in there but then when we got in there they warned us not to go in there cause there was a stag for a person and he had to dress in super woman and he had to stand still so they can shoot him.
We had three games of Paint ball it was really fun, hurt full, exciting, funny, it was fun and it was kind of disgusting.My brother had a exciting birthday and he was very tired at the end of the day.Two of the boys sleeping over and we all played play station 3 games one on one we were playing black ops or call of duty on the play station 3, My cousin James kept on winning and killing us on the game he's good cause he plays it every day.
That day was really exciting and tiring cause we were walking around.That day was really sore and I had a good time.Here are some photos about the day.
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This is a photo of all of us about to go in and play.jpeg)
This is us of all of us about to go in the map.jpeg)
This is a photo of us before of all of us going inside
This is a photo of me with the gun I'm going to use and suited up
Thanks for sharing your experience Leila. It looks like you all had a great time. I like the amount of effort that you have put into your writing, although you need to think carefully about proof reading and editing your work. There are lots of very long sentences that need full stops.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful time you had Leila. I am impressed that you have so many photos to share as well as a very full description of the event.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Mrs Burt
Thank you Mrs. Burt for your lovely comment that you left on my blog and thank you for telling me how well I did on my writing.
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